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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Thu Mar 08, 2012 8:34 pm

tama lahat... maganda ang pagkalahad mo hellionist
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:38 pm

hellionist wrote:
@rain Almost 80% to 90% dapat heroine's POV. Puwede magkaroon ng POV ang lalake at ibang characters provided minimal lang.

Sa switching naman, dapat isang POV lang sa isang scene. Pag-aralan mo yung paborito mong pocket book, kung paano yung transition from scene to scene. Kung sino iyong nagsasalita. Kung saan natatapos yung POV niya. Tapos mapapansin mo, sa next scene puwedeng siya pa rin o iba na yung POV. Kapag kasi magkaibang POV sa isang eksena, malilito yung magbabasa. Smile



ang galing niyo po...ganito din sana ang itatanong ko.. thnX Wink
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:52 am

ate jojo gurl yeah dami ko nalaman hehehe
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:40 am

hi laiza! sana naintindihan mo Very Happy


princess faye, anukaba, e guwapo para kay ambrosia ang ganun. un ang laman ng kanyang mga pantasya sa gabi.
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Wed Jun 08, 2011 2:34 pm

Ewan ko sayo Ate Jo! Hindi ko maimagine ang hero na gwapo pero bigote ni Hitler! Hahaha
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Wed Jun 08, 2011 9:56 am

asteg ate jojogurl imba ka talaga xD ang kulit ng presentation wiiiiw saludo ako
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Wed Jun 08, 2011 5:07 am

hellionist wrote:
@rain Almost 80% to 90% dapat heroine's POV. Puwede magkaroon ng POV ang lalake at ibang characters provided minimal lang.

Sa switching naman, dapat isang POV lang sa isang scene. Pag-aralan mo yung paborito mong pocket book, kung paano yung transition from scene to scene. Kung sino iyong nagsasalita. Kung saan natatapos yung POV niya. Tapos mapapansin mo, sa next scene puwedeng siya pa rin o iba na yung POV. Kapag kasi magkaibang POV sa isang eksena, malilito yung magbabasa. Smile



naku ate, thanks so much po for answering my question! hindi na ako malilito, Razz
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:44 pm

@rain Almost 80% to 90% dapat heroine's POV. Puwede magkaroon ng POV ang lalake at ibang characters provided minimal lang.

Sa switching naman, dapat isang POV lang sa isang scene. Pag-aralan mo yung paborito mong pocket book, kung paano yung transition from scene to scene. Kung sino iyong nagsasalita. Kung saan natatapos yung POV niya. Tapos mapapansin mo, sa next scene puwedeng siya pa rin o iba na yung POV. Kapag kasi magkaibang POV sa isang eksena, malilito yung magbabasa. Smile


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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:52 am

nice topic. tanong ko lang po, paano mag switch ng point of view? okay lang po ba kung may pov ang lalaki at babae?
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Thu Apr 07, 2011 6:17 pm

love the way u present the heroine's point of view jojogurl...
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:34 pm

hi lenlen... 'la ako maisip eh. hihihi
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:00 pm

@ate jojo- natawa naman ako dun sa "Ang bigote nito ay parang bigote ni Hitler at ang katawan nito ay parang kay Schwarzenegger." hahaha. kulet!
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Fri Mar 04, 2011 10:39 am

hello pu..
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Mon Feb 21, 2011 12:36 pm

welcome lenearlyn...

sana nakatulong. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Mon Feb 21, 2011 10:43 am

Hello Jojogurl,

Thanks po sa info.


Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: heroine's point of view   Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:33 pm

hi lenearlyn!

heroine's point of view sa third person kapag ung iniisip nung girl sa kuwento ang isinusulat mo. halimbawa ganito:

Nalaglag ang panga ni Ambrosia nang makita si Tomasito na pumasok sa pintuan. Napakaguwapo talaga nito! Ang bigote nito ay parang bigote ni Hitler at ang katawan nito ay parang kay Schwarzenegger. Bumilis ang tibok ng puso niya dahil papalapit ito sa kanya.

"Hi, Ambrosia!" anito.

Nag-init ang pisngi niya. "Hello, Tomasito," kiming sagot niya.



pag hero's point of view sa third person naman sa kaparehong sitwasyon, ganito:

Pumasok si Tomasito sa pintuan. Iginala niya ang paningin at nakita niyang naka-dekuwatro si Ambrosia na titig na titig sa kanya. Maganda ito. Mahaba ang alun-alon nitong buhok. Mestisahin ito at sexy.

Napabuntong-hininga siya. Kailan kaya siya magkakaroon ng lakas ng loob na ligawan ito? Lumapit siya. "Hi, Ambrosia," aniya.

"Hello, Tomasito," anito na namumula ang pisngi.




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PostSubject: heroine's point of view   Fri Feb 18, 2011 1:00 pm

tanong ko lang po, if ano ibig sabihin ng heroine's point of view, nag email ako sa phr, sabi nila if ready na ako magsulat at magpasa ng manuscript, isa ito sa mga advice na sinabi nla sa akin, dapat isinulat siya sa heroine's point of view sa third person..ndi ko cya ma getz kung paano iyon at ano ibig sabihin nun? thanks po sa mga magrereply. Very Happy
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